i like this. I think it turned out well.

"flower in the garden"
accordian keys are white beans
and green grass, blue garish
and dark seas, I am me
and you are you but tell me who's
going to watch the flowers in the garden?

there is a scene in the galaxy
that finds me standing upon a bed of roses
toes dug into the dirt
shirt discarded, melding with the barren Earth
I watch the vines wrap me up
Like smooth criminals
and pull me
(with somebody)
into serenity.